Ken's Speech part 1, second draft. Changes have been made according to comments on the slide following this. The original music is still present but only on the ending credits. Please comment.
0:00 - since we have worked on the final frame background, try to make the white png transition in a similar way, that is transition the background white in upper L and darker bottom R where text copy will be white in the final frame, try to defeat the white halo all around the logo
0:55 - consider adding laugh track in background, per Ken's request, and look for more situtations where he laughs at his own jokes. try to give a more participatory feel to the room ambiance
2:05 - slide in text: try changing font to less "old-school" version, can be less bold
2:06 - use M versus million to keep a standard, remove "s" from revenues and capitalize R
2:07 - consider using the grey font for all the flyin titles, like on the opening title screen
2:45 - put dollar sign in front of 1.25M
2:64 - use upper K behind $735
5:26 - misspelled: License
9:55 - end bookend looks great, lets look for another jazz music clip, no people credits, all the text should be devoted to facts about the video, the other video parts and what their titles are, and then the sexy sequence out to metapower.com
9:56 - begin logo sequence, reduce logo size in upper L to start smaller and provide a continuous expansion to the final position in the last frame. the logo animation continues through all the text frames to a large upper L position for final fade to black
9:57 - remove all frame & text about event coordinators
10:07 - remove all frame & text about photo/video production
10:12 - above the title "State" in small text add "you have been watching",
Place part 1:MetaPower..... up close to the "state" title, capitalize P in Part 1,
Add to Part 3: "Rolling Out" The New Brand,
In separated lower position add more text to explain the context of the talk (this will go on the end of each segment). Like: "From CEO Ken Allen's talk at the annual MetaPower Holiday Party, Vancouver, WA, November 17, 2012".
10:13 - fade in second frame & text sequence: small text "also available from this series is:larger text " Part 2 - xxx, Part 3 - xxx, Part 4 - xxx", then separated below "visit http://www.metapower.com"
10:14 - final frame sequence, large center text box fades away, create a white on transparent png that transitions from white in upper L to darker blue in bottom R this gives white background for logo field and darker background for url field, logo in upper L stops enlarging, tagline fades in under logo to complete the best version of logo, " http://www.metapower.com" fades in in white bottom R.